The
Gardener’s Daughter
“Paulina,
the gardener’s daughter, cares
About
flowers doomed to die.
If
I bring her a bouquet, she frees it
From
the ribbons and gently places it in the hospice
Of
a vase…”
Tadeusz
Dabrowski (“Bouquet” translated from Polish by Antonia Lloyd-Jones)
This poem
by Polish author, Dabrowski, was one of the prompts for writing last week.
Writing from prompts is an interesting exercise because each person sees the poem
through their own lens and each one is different. This is what I wrote:
“I had a dog once when I was in High School.
His name was Gronk, and he was a beagle mix—built low to the ground, with long,
velvet ears, and a bugle bark. My grandmother referred to him as “Gronk, the
Social Worker.”
“When I feed him,” she said, “he walks out
to the end of the driveway and barks. Then all the dogs in the neighborhood
come running fast and eat up his food! Stupid dog!”
I know, however, that some people and dogs
are just tender hearted. They care about things and people, and the planet—all the
time. They think about people who are hungry before they put a bite of food
into their mouths. They worry about feral cats on cold nights and put out
blankets for them. They carry food to sick neighbors and visit people who are
lonely—even people they don’t like very much. Sometimes, they annoy other
people with their caregiving, but those annoyed folks eat the food anyway,
because it’s good.
Gronk was like that. So was Paulina, the
gardener’s daughter. I’m not, so I’m glad they were.
Hopefully,
most of us have a little Paulina and Gronk in us. We care about other people,
sometimes to our own detriment. It’s only a problem when we care about other
people more than they want us to, and we act in codependent ways that make them
feel suffocated or incompetent. When we do too much, they pull away from us so they can grow
up and become independent adults. We mean well, but we do harm. It’s a good
thing to think about before we just assume that someone needs something, but we
don’t ask them.
In
the Spirit,
Jane
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